Memories
para-sailed,
like September flurries
Scattered,
raindrops fell
Impressioned
against my face,
her warmth lingered
Author notes
Prompt ~ Her hands are still warm
A contest entry
- Speak volumes in few words by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended September 24, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I'm blown away!!
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So beautifully descriptive... x
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beautiful write ... think you have a winner here.. good luck in the contest
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I love the simplistic beauty of this poem, and the set out of it is also wonderfully unique. Best to you in the contest
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aww.. catchy title as well i love it
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funny how memories work something i've always pondered on and you wrote it out so beautiful the wonder of it all great job you were very creative in your style nicely done
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