as a procession
of ripples fade
to a landscape,
once touched
nothing grows there
…anymore
Author notes
palm of your hand still warm
though fading
A contest entry
- Speak volumes in few words by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended September 24, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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gah, I love the way you lay words on a page...this is the kind of stuff that is worth reading...at least in my book.
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sad, profound...nothing more to say, other than congratulations on the HM, and keep your pen moving.
love, laney
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Wonderful work my friend...it says so much in brevity and is rather sad...brillant in brevity as always...
Love,
mystic
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Creatively written and deeply compelling... x
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Wonderful write.. love the interpretation off of the prompt.. good luck in the contest
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This is a beautiful thought. I think it does speak volumes. Best to you in the contest
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