Sensuously gazing towards the one you adore
Presented with a rose and the hope of much more
Embracing the future with dreams yet realized
So much love gazing from within her beautiful eyes
No need for words just the smoldering touch
That look that says I love you so very much
That he feels the same way is no great surprise
Mere words not needed it’s all in the eyes
Author notes
PROMPT:
"Within Your Eyes"
PICTURE: by Poetryintheblood
A contest entry
- Within Your Eyes. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended September 26, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything but gold... by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended October 3, 2008, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is just beautiful. It flows well and leaves a vivid picture in your mind. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave such a nice comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Thank you for your beautifully worded entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thank you for taking the time to comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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A beautiful poem to go with a beautiful picture. Very sensual and somewhat erotic for the readers who can read between the lovely lines. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you so much for the kindness of your words. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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how are u able to write all that from a picture? i cant do that no matter how hard I try. I guess thats the difference between a good poet and a poet. You, are a great poet!
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You are definitely good for my ego. I don't know where the words come from they just come. It's always been that way. I write when I'm happy, sad, hurt, lonely, tired, I just love to write and I thank God for allowing me to do so. God Bless, Never forget you are a great poet. Jo-Ann
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