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rainbow

I am the rainbow
Filled with color of my life
Mind is spinning on, all my daily
The thoughts of him, the one I love, brings
Colors so bright and vivid to my soul
Let knowing that I would not see him
Brings black and gray to mind
To only hear his voice would
Bring the rainbow to surface
Peace to mind yet sorrow to the soul
To know I won’t be in his arms
And not have to chance to lay with him
To feel the warmth of his body
To see his smile would bring passion
Red as fire to the soul.
To lay in his arms, to hear his heart, to feel his breath
Brings shades of blue and green
Relaxed at the idea that I know
He is happy and alive with me
But to not be with him brings
Shades of black and purple
For not being with him is a stab to the heart
This is my soul this is my life
The Rainbow

Author notes

i chose the rainbow becase i can not show everything that i am with just one color.

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  • HorrorFiend
    January 17
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    The opening lines were great, a rainbow is a great way to describe ones self.


  • star sparks
    November 17, 2008
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    WOW! i love this... it's so freakin awesome!


  • Nienna Calmcacil
    September 23, 2008

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    As I said to another contestant: We can't ever have one color that represents us completely... we all have our own colors, so unique that they've never been seen before. I guess a rainbow is as close as you can get to describing it =)

    Thanks for the entry!