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before winter haiku

barren skies shiver
fall leaves complacently die
form ugly beauty

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haiku humor

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  • NotAMolly
    September 25, 2008
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    like the term ugly beauty.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 25, 2008

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    Nice haiku. I like them but suck at writing them and have decided to stick with simple rhymes.

    Great job.

    Mike


  • Yemassee gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    It's an odd season, Autumn. I suppose they all are in their way, but it's like you write, things are dying and yet they are beautiful...even after the colors are gone, the brown leaves, the stark, bare trees, maybe their shapes, have that beauty.

    ugly beauty...sounds like me.

    Thanks for entering!


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    September 23, 2008
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    good images...