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Diversion




Threw around
black miniskirt, stockings
development under shades
sometimes in corridor.

Cerebration explodes
clutching warmness.

















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~spiritualangel~

Prompt: Her hands are still warm
15 words

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    September 24, 2008
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    Such a unique and compelling take... x


  • spiritualangel
    September 23, 2008
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    Thanks for the comment. CEREBRATION is a word means.. To Think out. It is not celebration, but within the sense of cerebral. And With this, Threw is perfect as it is only a cerebral whirl tendency.


  • poppa
    September 23, 2008

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    Lovely take on the prompt ... good luck in the contest.
    small suggestion, perhaps change threw to thrown and I think you have a typo "cerebation" is it celebration ?


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    This is a lovely interpetation of the prompt, you have a great piece here. Best to you in the contest