reserved looks form hesitations and
innuendos before reaching to know why
we aren't the same
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15 words only
A contest entry
- priceless by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended September 25, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
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the ending was really thought provoking. A startling write!
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Your tips are iceburgs.
A short beard out side and the real long one inside.
I had a cat and I know if I teased her she would put out her paw to touch my hand and look away.
Lol
Imagine a boy and a girl together.
If the girl is a feline (Cat) she will look away and be reserved in confidence.
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Sincerely clever and well thought out... x
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Sometimes, my cat reaches out its paw and gently touches my skin and asks me the same question.
You have a poet’s affinity with cats.
Thanks for posting this,
Love, Peter
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A great take on the prompt, I love how most have gone the sensual approach on this prompt, not this little black duck. How sad am I. Grand interpretation of the prompt. Best to you in the contest
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