shivers down my spine connect
thoughts of chill while holding
a hot Starbucks coffee mug
Author notes
prompt: Her hands are still warm
15 words only
A contest entry
- Speak volumes in few words by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended September 24, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great expression and imagery therein... x
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Who needs television, when they can read one of your short poems and get blindingly clear images in their imagination?
Thanks for posting this,
Love, Peter
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excellent
Such terrific expression in a short poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wonderful "real-life" poetry.
Gool luck with this.
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thanks
haven't you had this happen when you are cold ?? it's a weird feeling . . appreciate the comments !!
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I have to admit to getting a giggle here too. I couldn't conjur up that sort of thought for this prompt if I tried. Marvellous. Best to you in the contest
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Very creative and unquie...you went in a very different way which is always good...nicely enjoyable...
best to you!
mystic
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wonderful lol a unique take and I found it funny, hope that doesnt offend ...good luck in the contest
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