Eyes wide open,
man or animal,
look is same.
It tells about
naughtiness or innocence.
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Author notes
Prompt: Picture painted by Becky Hicks
A contest entry
- priceless by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended September 25, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Within Your Eyes. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended September 26, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Great take and immensely expressive... x
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I like this interpretation of the prompt, it goes outside what can be seen and delves into what can't Best to you in the contest
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