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every orphan's saint (H.M.)

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1554 grew into men
with her care
before heaven called
every orphan’s saint

 

 

 

 

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13 words inspired by the contest picture

http://digitalhomicide.deviantart.com/art/Abandoned-House-5166705

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  • dustookie2
    November 7, 2008

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    Hood Winked!!

    Such emotions pour through this poem... so much is said in so few words. You come across a poem now and then when words need not be said because the poet has presented such a poem there is no words to be said in a comment.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    Ohh what a wonderful take!! Aww an orphanage, and the passing of it's 'saint'.
    Most have seen this picture as a metaphor for aging.. you have seen it is something so precious!!!

    The way you can look at a picture and pull something completely unseen out of it is amazing.. and always so perfect!