Pale prick of the evening heat,
Like thin needles that bite into memories braided arches,
Twenty-second spotlighted dream of an evening waits.
I crawl and curve on the bed.
The conch-shell shaped touchtone phone,
I toss its wire not to let my fingers run loose.
Your respires jog on my skin.
And I wish you were there,
Not just on the phone.
So hug me when am there,
Miss me like am not there,
Smile at me in my dreams,
Kiss me everyday!
No matter how this painful distance could be,
The hoax diversion of the hormone game,
Heats up the bulls-rage puff that blows out through my nose.
I know I want you by my side,
And I wish you were there,
Not just on the phone.
So hug me when am there,
Miss me like am not there,
Smile at me in my dreams,
Kiss me everyday!
The music would sound better with you.
The tousled sheets would make me taste desire,
Sweat! when I close my eyes,
Be with me,
Entertain me in sheer purity.
Cause I wish you were there,
Not just on the phone.
So hug me when am there,
Miss me like am not there,
Smile at me in my dreams,
Kiss me everyday!
Author notes
2.Write about waiting for love to com
AP name : Fumes
A contest entry
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Comments
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I Like
I enjoyed the repetition in it and it made me long for him...great job. Best of wishes in this contest.
mandie
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awh this is cute,
thanks for entering
good luck
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