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It's No More Night.. Still Not Bright..



The last star has left the sky
Leaving the land to twilight's grace,
Darkness goes hushing by..
To leave not the night time's trace..

There's just the moon, who waits to see
The dawn adorn her throne..
While the world is still in a slumber spree
The clouds all lazy, tired and blown..

It's no more night and still not bright
Traces of darkness sticking still..
It's that lucid hour, which runs out of sight
As silence sings a music shrill..

Sometime.. past the night, before the sun shine strides
When golden swans are said to fly
And mermaids rush to hide..
There's magic in the sky..

A precious moment ~ when dreams take their flight
And angels pause by window panes..
It's no more night and still not bright
The Queen of dreams, holds her reign..





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  • Dangerousparable silver member
    November 3, 2008
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    The Queen of dreams, holds her reign..

    what beautiful word


  • Legend silver member
    October 29, 2008
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    Excellent

    I guess i missed this one raspberry thank you for sending the link, There are time that i read then get distracted before commenting Though not this time As ever you manage to weave magic into your works. That is what make reading it always a pleasure
    Take care


  • the ripple
    October 14, 2008
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    A really dreamy and nice write. Glorifying the bridge between today and tommorrow, between night and day, i think. I Like it.


  • second-born
    September 24, 2008

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    wow...I like this one...it has a dreamy effect that takes my imagination to a magical land...now I can't wait to meet 'the Queen of Dreams' later at night...