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your heart

on a petal-stool
that where you placed me
on a petal-stool
with dreams and magic
i lazes away on feather pillows
without a worry to my name
security and devotion
my home within this stream
floating pearls gleaming jewels
a misty purple hazes
this petal-stool
i've come to see
is a place within your heart

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    Aww such a sweet and beautiful write! I to like the petal-stool twist, very creative idea. A very touching take on the picture, good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    Aww now that's the kind of pedestal that would be nice to be put on (like the twist with petal-stool!!)

    Lovely take!

    (L2 "that" should be "that's", L5 "lazes" should be "laze")


  • sxylilma
    September 23, 2008
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    animated

    this poem is so wonderfully animated