swathed snuggly
in bunny rug pink
parents weep
for daughter’s tiny cry
which never came
Author notes
15 words inspired by the contest phrase ~Her hands are still warm
A contest entry
- Speak volumes in few words by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended September 24, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nicely penned . . liked "swathed snuggly" and "daughter's tiny cry" . . congrats on the trophy
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a very daunting write this is...well done...congrates on the bronz
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Oh that's so sad!
Amazing!
Well done on your bronze! Only the best place in GypsyPrincess' contest... and you most definitely have the talent hun!!
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This only won bronze
Totally gold worthy!
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Sadly not good enough for anything more
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I've got chills~ this is so heartbreakingly gripping... x
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Aww...this is sad and profound.
Good luck in the contest.
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heartbreaking. been there.
i think this will touch a lot of readers.
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Such a sad and deep take on the prompt. Beautiful flow and imagery. There is so much emotion in so few of words. Very moving, and beautifully penned. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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spell bound, sad!
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How heart breaking...every word holds a moment to never be forgotten...truly moving and very sad...beautiful work...
Best to you!
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woah, tragic tale you have woven in so few words... that was my take on the prompt also when I seen it ... good luck in the contest, though after reading this, dont think I will enter
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