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Waiting



I glance up at the crucifix on the wall
  expecting to see something happen
it doesn't
  but then why should it?

Hours have passed and I never noticed
  I bring the glass to my lips
warm beer tastes sour
  but then why shouldn't it?

I watch it circle down the sink
  not today
maybe when I feel less brave.












 

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  • Dalaney gold member
    September 27, 2008

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    A very good little free verse here, and very poignant.

    Love
    Suz
    xxxxx