Why is it that you’re always looking at the window?
Hey I’m talking to you but you’re just ignoring my reaction
Sit down, stand up, turn around, do everything you could
But when she passes by you hold still like a good dog
Even I raised my brows I try to kill my instinct
Believe in your talk even when you stammered ‘til the finish
But my friends saw you with her kissing on the corner
Now you want to say my friends are telling lies, wohhh, aren’t they?
Refrain:
(This is not right) You’re here with me but your thoughts are with her
(This is not right) Whispered your name but you whispered hers
(This is not right) And I don’t wanna make it right
So tonight…I want you to go right away
Chorus:
So just leave…get out of my place
I bought this house even bought your clothes
Hey I can even buy your soul
So just leave…get out of my life
I made it before all on my own
Hey I can even make it better without you
Only days passed by since I accept your sorry
When I caught you with her going to the movies
Now don’t deny just pack your belongings
Coz I’ll be damned if I still let you hold my hand, wohhh, my beautiful hand
Refrain:
(This is not right) You’re here with me but your thoughts are with her
(This is not right) Whispered your name but you whispered hers
(This is not right) And I don’t wanna make it right
So tonight…I want you to go right away
Chorus except the last two words:
So just leave…get out of my place
I bought this house even bought your clothes
Hey I can even buy your soul
So just leave…get out of my life
I made it before all on my own
Hey I can even make it better…oh even make it better
Chorus 2x:
So just leave…get out of my place
I bought this house even bought your clothes
Hey I can even buy your soul
So just leave…get out of my life
I made it before all on my own
Hey I can even make it better without you
Author notes
"In the end, I may fall, but with you by my side, it will be as if I had not fallen at all" #3
A contest entry
- SO WHAT?! I don't want you tonight! by StarvingAuthor.
324 points, ended October 22, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm done with this! (options) by PsychoAnalysis.
850 points, ended November 4, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Insightful comments are truly appreciated
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I would have to say that I did enjoy it...but Writing in the "Chorus" and "Refrain" words really took away from the lyrics, and destracted me from the lyrics themselves. All in all, a good lyrical write. Best of luck in my contest.
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awesome!
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Interesting take on the prompt
You have penned this very well and yes sometimes we just want to say get out and not be bothered with all the argueing and fighting yet once gone the silence screams in a high pitch what now . Good write here
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Wow
These lyrics are amazing! Good luck in the contest! -
ooooh cruel but sometimes HELL YEAH...when you've reach your limit...you don't give a damn anymore.
ganitong-ganito ako, hindi nga lang third party hehe.
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