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Three old men


                      Three old men
                      Sitting next to me
                      They ordered roast beef
                      And sat down to eat
                                                   

                      Three old men
                      Eating roast beef
                      It was so stinky
                      It smelled like my feet!

Author notes

I meant the roast beef was stinky in 'it smelled like my feet. The it in the poem means roast beef. I might have repeated roast beef to much.

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  • little-hug silver member
    September 23, 2008
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    This is so cute and brilliant. It is a very funny little poem but I feel bad for you if you really did have to deal with that smell. I love story-poems and this one made me grin Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
    Ellie


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 23, 2008
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    Oh this is so cute

    I loved it and keep up the good writes here . And please read some of mine they are teen friendly