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Making Love To Patsy Cline...

Staring at her scar
I blew back her bangs and heard
Angels from the South.

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female singer, obviously
Written January 22nd, 2004

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  • cvillelisa
    December 8, 2008

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    Came looking - someone wrote a Patsy cline poem and I want to leave this in my comment. I never ever ever forget this one.

    How's that Little One?

    xo

  • zara
    August 22, 2006
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    Lisa sent me. I think she's about to give me a tour of the horus house.

  • cvillelisa
    August 22, 2006
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    Just thought of this....

  • cvillelisa
    July 25, 2005
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    Just me.


  • CountryCousin
    June 4, 2005
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    Southern but Virginian.

    Not Tupelo but Amherst, Virginia is where Patsy was born but she was a powerful singer and mine got in here by accident should have been elsewhere. Thanks for the contest though and Patsy Cline was a sultry voice that was stilled too soon in a plane crash. Have to like that.


  • Leah Rose
    May 28, 2005
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    Oh, I think I interpreted this in maybe the wrong way. Umm, but I still liked it. I thought it was very cool that you could make such a good haiku when talking about such an amazingly talented person. You did a very good job.

    Good luck in the contest.

    Miseria

  • Pinkypants
    May 27, 2005
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    haha! You have such a way with words! Amusing in some respects! A very delicate haiku that can be read and interpreted in many ways!!!


  • bloodshedsunset
    May 23, 2005
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    Woah, this is crazy, but unique and very, very good. Haiku's are so fun


  • cvillelisa
    March 29, 2004
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    holy crap i can't believe i was here already this month...i was just thinking about something you said...

    this my most all time favorite erotic poem ...so there.

  • cvillelisa
    March 5, 2004
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    erotic haikus rock.


  • horus8 gold member
    February 17, 2004
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    Fridgeno1


  • cvillelisa
    February 12, 2004
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    Too bad there isn't more. But there really doesn't need anymore because it is sticky and lingers. I drove over from Jimmy's house to see how they matched up.


  • jenneddin silver member
    February 5, 2004
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    Yes Yes Yes.... I've found it.... been thinking on this for awhile... I am a southern lady... though the lady part is a little off skew..... she is an angel with her voice.....and if I had one night left it would be with her.... her and her voice....just singing.

  • KeepingTheStars
    February 2, 2004
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    Very Nice.

  • cvillelisa
    January 26, 2004
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    this is tupelo honey with a dash of tabasco for good measure.. i love this.


  • Nyx Iscariot
    January 23, 2004
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    hmm...scars are always interesting.

    i have one, but i did it from stupidity...i ran into a door frame at 3 and have a nice lovely stitch scar on the forehead.

    im SOO lucky

    Nyx...


  • Naughtygrlred
    January 23, 2004
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    your welcum

  • horus8 gold member
    January 23, 2004
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    Thank you sweets.

  • Naughtygrlred
    January 22, 2004
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    what a lovely write


  • cvillelisa
    January 22, 2004
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    god this is gorgeous...i'm sitting here starting at it...and though its about 32 degrees..I'm feeling Crazy. maybe need to pop her in for a spell....beauty.

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