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Buttered me up, as I asked for a pay rise
Rye discussed and refused. 
Egg on my face as a result of this
Additives their outside influences, human resources.   
Dough not kneaded nor needed.


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  • toomysterious
    September 23, 2008
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    Very interesting and great use of words.

  • piccola silver member
    September 23, 2008
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    LOL. This is very clever! Well done, thank you for entering.


  • Symphony
    September 23, 2008

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    LMAO some nice inner meaning in this one, LOL - i got confused just reading it, how on earth did you ever manage to write it - great job!!