I hate you I hate everything you say you are
I hate you for because of you I have another scar
I hate you for pretending to be everything to me
I hate you for not looking at yourself can't you see
I hate you for the power that I have let you have
I hate you for the way you make me feel so bad
I hate you for never having real love to just give
I have you so much it makes me not want to live
I hate you for making me cry and feel so ashamed
I hate you for making it my fault and being blamed
I hate you for what you have molded me to become
I hate you for making me feel like less than someone
I hate you for making me hate not just you but myself
I hate you for having me stuff those feelings on the shelf
I hate you for without warning making me become we
I hate you for being you but most of all....
I hate you for being me!!
A contest entry
- Hatred at it's best. by Rejected Easter Egg.
1080 points, ended October 25, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I need a title...If ya come up with one I'll give ya points!
Comments
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I hate myself for letting someone have that much power of me, and I hate myself for being who I am so that anyone could even think of having the chance to be like me...GRR! Masterpiece indeed, but even that is an understatement to the beauty that is your work. I'm sorry you ever had to go through that, you didn't deserve that *hugs*
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Wow...that was really good....And whoever it was about is a bitch
And I will never ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever make you feel like that...I know what it feels like, and could not do it to you.....
I love you.
Stay Safe.
I miss you.
I Love you.
You are my everything.
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i really liked it matteh. it shows so much emotion inside. i really fell like that right now at this very moment
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great write matteh... u have a major talent here!!! how about 'hatred inside' something like that x
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