I hear you Tenderly whisper
Sweet words to rest upon my ear
The Touch of your hand grazing my skin
Tells me more
Than the voice in my soul
I feel your body crushing me
The weight of you comforting
As you steal my breath…
Time… after Gasping… time
The Pleasure you Drive through me
Sends a quiver through my fringes
Forgetting all sensation
Until you Touch me again
Let me say I’m longing
To be with you again
To feel pressing up against me
Losing ourselves in Passion
Let me say I dream of you
Holding me close
Caressing
Sending chills down my spine
Feeling everything and nothing
Touch me again Dearest
I’m desperate for your hands
Make me alive again
Set me afire
Give me the kiss of life
Me the brush of love
The sense of freedom
Let me feel passion
Let me feel you
The branding of your lips
Burning across my body
Shivering with secret wonder
…oh those prodding hands…
I hear you Tenderly whisper
Sweet words to rest upon my ear
The Touch of your hand grazing my skin
Tells me more
Than the voice in my soul
A contest entry
- Give Me What You Got by peregrin.
600 points, ended October 5, 2008, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do you think I should give this poem to him? I Want to, but i dont want to appear clingy or anything.
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hide erotica, eh? nice...i didn't read it. kind of scared to, actually.
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oh bother. lol. you know me Katie. its NEVER as raunchy as the computer makes it seem. lol
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I hear you Tenderly whisper
Sweet words to rest upon my ear
The Touch of your hand grazing my skin
Tells me more
Than the voice in my soul
I LOVE IT!
Gah, it is brilliant!
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thank you for the contest! lol.
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'I feel your body crushing me
The weight of you comforting
As you steal my breath...'
You are so fantastic at description of the love play, honey!
'The pleasure you drive through me
Sends a quiver through my fingers'
I'd love to experience the pleasure...
'The touch of your hand grazing my skin'
I can feel the beautiful touch of yours on my skin, too, sweetie!
Kisses all over!
Galaxy2
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haha thanks. I wrote it for my boyfriend....but idk if i will/should give it to him.
I'm glad you liked it though. =)
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