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HA!! I could go on forever,
..can i just start over?
instead of lingering,
.. hover?......


tired of your lies
your blue eyes
my disguise
knowing i was not wise
tired of this game
i cant stand
playing pretend
when whats broken
can not be mend
tired of this all
this fortress
this wall
watch it crumble
watch it fall

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