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Brand New

 

 

 

Whenever we make love

whether it's  planned

or at the spare of a moment

it always feels

brand new

 

 

 

On those nights

when there's nothing

much to do

I curl up on your lap

we talk and talk

for what seems like, forever

we had the same conversation

plenty of times before,

and this time we discover

secrets that were never told

before

 

 

 

I've kissed your lips and other

places to, almost a

million times

[ but who's counting ]

from our first

until the next

and each time still feels

like a brand new start for us, 

I continue to melt

with your gentle touch

 

 

 

When the night calls

and I undress for you

baring my all,

you say " I am beautiful fine art ",

and you paint me with

your tongue

Your finger roam freely

to cover every spot

which till this day, brings me alive

 

 

 

On sheets of satin

you place me softly

and bare down upon me

 soaking me in your love

once again this brand new feeling

welcomes you in

to warmth and softness

just where you belong,

and this feeling is called, love.

 

 

 

 

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yPWOKGVoMN4

{ is this the way love feels, by Chrisette Michele

 

 

 

 

 

 

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~~~ For my very Special Someone ~~~

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  • NyxianaSpades
    October 5

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    I've been stuck on your poem in my contest for days Still haven't made up my mind but its a brilliant write.


  • Serenity-words
    August 21

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    This is truly beautiful. An amazing write, no questions there.
    I will say though some parts sounded a little cliché, but other than that spectacular.
    ~Serenity


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 21

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    I really loved and enjoyed reading this beautiful write from you! When you find that every time you meet is like the first time all over again, that's a wonderful feeling both inside and out! I think that that is how every relationship should be like. It's a time to discover and rediscover each other and never let go of all that you have shared. If only every relationship was like that, the world would be a more passionate and caring place. I hope that you and your loved one continue to find such beauty and love with every passing day! Beautiful words here my friend and congratulations to you on your two trophies. Very well deserved! All the best to you in this contest and take care!




    Jeremy0826

  • great work. this has been different than your other poems and it's good to see a different side from you. You've made a 10 on this poem. So all together you've got 45 so far. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you. kahy


  • Floatational
    March 21
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    Outstanding you deserved the gold trophy have a blessed day!!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    March 21

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    Stunning

    In it's sheer openess of heart, beauty personified.
    congrats on the gold, shame there's platinium too!

  • Absolutely Beautiful....

    very honest, touching and pure in heart. I loved this piece.
    Thank you for entering and goog luck
    e


  • happy-lil-artemis
    December 8, 2008
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    wow i loved the image you placed here and yes i do beleive this is what love fells like good luck


  • poetryality silver member
    November 3, 2008

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    ~SIGH

    I could have written the first stanza. Oh...Yes! Beautiful! ~Sigh

    OMG! Please correct this!

    "and you paint me with
    you[r] tongue..."


    I was rolling baby-girl, and that stopped me. Gotta go back to it now...

    I LOVE THIS! I have such a need to share these words with my husband of 35 years. Thank you for this sensual entry and I wish you the best in the challenge.



    Much Love Always ♥

    Renee


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 2, 2008

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    Wow, very beautiful, sexy write. I really love this piece.


    whisper


  • Darkened Seraph
    September 30, 2008

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    I love this so much makes me wish that i could spend every second of my life just holding my girlfriend in my arms, i've moved away from home now so i rarely get to see her now, seeing her this weekend but the next time i see her after that will be december due to the distance between us.
    ANYWAY..... This has a beautiful flow and imagery in it and which i'm sure not only I can relate to, a wonderful poem.

    Much love, Seraph


  • Never Fall in Love
    September 27, 2008

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    ooooooooookay
    I shouldn't be reading this...
    but I have to say that I love the background!


    I hope you're okay


  • Shakes-spear
    September 23, 2008

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    Very Nice

    There is no better feeling than to be in the arms of the one you love.(OK a nice piece of chocolate is close! LOL) Love is so wonderful; and I'm glad you have found this, I know that I have too! Great write, Bubba


    • Loveandblessings2u gold member
      September 23, 2008
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      Hi My Brother Bubba, such a cute name.
      Thank you for reading my words.
      I am so glad you are feeling love,
      like I am. It really is the best feeling.
      I must admit, I love me some chocolate too.

      Loveandblessings2u & yours always
      Joyce


  • trista gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    Hi Joyce...

    I have to agree with Michelle...*sigh* There's no better feelings than those you've described...at least from what I remember. Honestly, this practically puts me in tears, but good ones. I'm so happy YOU are happy...because you've always had the heart of a dreamer, and your dreams deserved to come true. Lovely, beautiful, and truthful words. TY for a wonderful read before I drift off to sleep this morning...

    Love and s
    ~J.


    • Loveandblessings2u gold member
      September 23, 2008
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      Oh No Julie, is that you I see LoL,
      wow it's been a long time. I hope all
      is going well with you. I have missed
      you. Just when do you think you will
      write again, I miss reading your words
      so much.
      Anyway thanks a lot for stopping by,
      it is always so nice to see something
      from you.
      Thanks for being so happy from me,
      I still feel as if I am living a dream LoL.

      Loveandblessins2u & yours always
      Love Ya,
      Joyce


  • michellemybelle gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    Sighs...oh Joyce, this is simply beautiful! It makes me smile to know you are living this. Thank you for sharing this blessed love, I can't imagine anyone more worthy. I love this background also!
    much love and blessings,
    Michelle


    • Loveandblessings2u gold member
      September 23, 2008
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      Hi Michelle,
      Thank you so much for being happy for me
      I am really blessed.
      I fell in love with the background to.
      I am missing John, and will be very
      happy to see him tomorrow.
      I wrote this as a little welcoming
      home gift. He has a copy of every poem
      I've ever written for him.

      Loveandblessings2u & yours always
      Joyce

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