They say the moon is nearly full
They say their eyes are nearly dry
They know how wonderful it is
To be alive
And I know I won't have that luxury
As, by miracle of alchemy
I mesh with the earth, with the ashes of the dirt
One foot in my early tomb
She says all those things, she never meant
As, by miracle of chemistry
Her truths bond with the lies, with the light
Till all I can see
Is the eclipse of the moon across the sky
And all the rays of silver light melt away what was
As, by miracle of osmosis
My mind absorbs all the truth, all the lies
And all my rage slowly fades away, sails away
On the current of the wind across the sky.
Questions? Comments? Money? Please refrain from the first , but feel free to shower me in the latter two.
Comments
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some of it didn't flow,but most of it did, I liked it a lot! very nicely done! lots of emotion... though I am pretty sure that is key in poetry.lol.
Bravo
Shawn
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I hate myself for not commenting on this earlier. Well, I did...just not here. So yeah...it's really good. Like, really really good. Write more like this...or else.
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I like the flow of this and the depth of this. Very thought provoking.
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pretty, dark some. whoo! i like it a lhhhhhot. you're such a good poet!
~kassie
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