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for who it is intended

I once drempt of warm white sands
A tidlewave  washed the beach a way
Left is the memories of sounds
Like a distant tune played on a guitar
Life is like that confussion of time and space

I am right
I was set up
They have their own agender

Me I shall stop playing this game

I Will change the sounds of life to  wedding bells

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  • Keystone Theater
    July 5

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    A number of typos in this poem but there is also some earnest sentiment which shows a desire you hope to make happen. I certainly hope you have, or will.