Dragon Spirit

I am
Can you see

Dreams in lost sleep

                     Magic that sets you free
                  Perhaps lost there in the night
                Darkness comes in stormy flight
              I am the one that heart still longs for
    When you wander the places of all lost hearts
If you could awake for the dreams of lost sleep
The Spirit of the Dragon queen still waits lost apart

Author notes

Not sure if this will work, anyway Its worth a try lol

A contest entry

Picture Inspired- please read contents by StormGoddess. 300 points, ended October 7, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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StormGoddess
September 29, 2008

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It does work. Reads stronger from the bottom up, which is what I was looking for, but still makes some degree of sense if read straigh forward. Good job.

Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm
kiwigirljacks
September 22, 2008
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It works

I like the strength in the write! If only we could see sometimes hey!
trekkergirl
September 22, 2008
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not bad. Like the way this one lines up. And I like tales of a dragon. Very creative. Good job