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Be My Angel

Your fingers slipping

(what to do)

A love once known
Is lost in the sky

I never wanted to make you cry
Late at night I sit with you on my mind

The memories play like an old video
As the lullabies flow through my head

I recall those nights
You wished to be dead

Your wish came true
Now I am with out you.

Your happy right baby
that’s all that matters now

Weaker and weaker I become
Still I manage to hand on

For what I don’t know
Still iv came to far to give in

So be my angel
Guide me dear

I miss you so
This you should know.

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  • dysfunctional poet
    October 9, 2008

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    This is really good and you really should post more stuff. You shed light on a lovely soul through your words and passion.

  • Kryptonite
    September 23, 2008
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    Wow

    Simply Beautiful!
    Very nice poem Selena


  • XXClownXLoveXx
    September 23, 2008
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    This is an amazing poem
    your a great writer
    I hope you post more

  • headintheclouds
    September 23, 2008

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    Thats so sad!!!

    The part about memories is so beautiful! The ending is so perfect for the poem. Its amazing. I can totally feel your pain through this poem. keep writing girl!

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