i hate it
my soul is being torn
and I hear it with my heart
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dedicated to my friend jen... it tears me up to go... but my futures waiting out there
thanks for being the best a friend could ask for
A contest entry
- B&W Photo Prompt Contest by Girl With Guitar.
700 points, ended October 30, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I do like pieces that can say so much in so little words, however I think this could do with a few more.
I get two ideas from this, a parent having lost a child (run away, kidnapped) and is waiting for the return. Or a mother who cannot fall pregnant, or who is trying to and is waiting for the future to come to them.
I viewed a comment below that says they couldn't connect the message to the picture and if my ideas aren't correct then I'm in the same boat as him. lol.
Otherwise though, it's a good write. Thank you for the entry.
ITNC -
This is a very powerful statement but I can't connect it to the PIC I would love to see a few more stanzas explaining such deep emotional words
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wow.....this is very powerful, for such a small amount of words, and i love the picture. good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥
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