You see many grapes,
and I some poetry
in the harvesting work
In a list
A contest entry
- Set phrasers to STUN (This is a Contest.) by blind ecye dog.
850 points, ended October 17, 2008, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Three Lines Of Wonder by poets whisper.
700 points, ended November 4, 104 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a nice perspective - it reminds me of something an artistic farm laborer's child might observe. I like its straight forward power, simply stated. It feels like it carries the potential to be developed into something longer, too, perhaps a series of such observations around the vineyard.
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So true and it says so much for so few words. I see why you got a trophy!
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Such a lovely image! A great up-lifting read.
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The poetry is in the first pressing. Well deserved silver.
Garrison
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So, "grapes" aren't only the surroundings, but also a metaphor of inspiration within the clusters. That's not the refined check of juice yet, still a few specks to revise, but it situates a process.
Thank you for befriending my intent
Daisy
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hm, just like in a painting, people chose to see what they see in work as well.
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Thank you for your paraphrasing to how this had thought-provoking imagery to you ~
That's real direct for all creativity that shows you what you can't see, basically, because even if you have a garden for example too, this emotion you may have not captured before.
Thanks again for the reaching simplicity
Daisy
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your background is so pretty and i think also the words you used were enough to create what was asked, well done
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Very well done. You are one of the few who understood that the right few words have more power without extra, useless words.
Well structured metaphor. RED
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Very nice work here
I love the poem and the pic its so peacful a feeling for me .Keep up the good work . Say my work is teen friendly and I would love for you to read a few of mine and tell me what you think .
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