I feel (sort of) empty,
sometimes.
Days like this seem to
d
r
i
p
down the page,
flutterby moments stuck in tree goo,
a minuscule blob of gold with an even smaller spider inside.
Moments like this seem to
PuLsE
slower and slower,
a machine-read trace of life strung out on a line for all to see.
It's a little bit funny, don't you think,
how naked these costumed times feel?
Author notes
it's been a while since I've written anything, so I'm really rusty.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I thought this was interesting very clear and consise, the typing grabbed me, pretty good write, I don,t think you are so rusty
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Your typing got my attention. I love it great write. Even though you are a bit rusty it doesnt seem to show. I love how you wrote it and how you woreded it! Great job!
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I like this, and the way you've typed it is very attentiion grabbing and brings the poem to life almost.
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