What I would give to hold you in my arms
To smell the sweet smell of your hair
To look at your beauty
It’s killing me not being able to see you
To not be able to love you
Words can only last so long
Actions last a life time
What I would give to show you I love you
Instead of say it
What I would give to be able to hold you for 5 seconds
To just rest somewhere quiet with you
Away from noise
Away from everything
Just you and me
But until that day
All I can say is
“I”
“LOVE”
“YOU”
what do u think..be honest cause i cant write
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It's such a lovely poem, and a sad story is behind the lovely work of art it is. Nice write!
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usually i dont like love poems but this one isnt chessy like most are acctually its really good just like all of your other poems. its sad to, reminds me of somebody who i love but cant have yet i still love him like a stalker, your very awsome dude keep it up
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WOW!
i love this poem... its so sweet and lovely and beautiful.
I LOVE IT!!! keep writing!
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lovely write here. I especially like how you ended it with the words I LOVE YOU! Great job here.
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This poem is totally sweet ♥
I love the lines:
"It’s killing me not being able to see you
To not be able to love you
Words can only last so long
Actions last a life time"
Slight typo in the line:
"To smell the sweat smell of your hair"
--> it should be "sweet" not "sweat".
But beautifully penned.
Forever--x
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Yep...know the feeling. I think about this exact thing every single day. What I would give. Oh...what I would give. Heh. Sometimes things will go your way...and sometimes things are out of your control.
The full heart people like you and me have...they are meant for people to destroy. Trust me...mine is barely alive.
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