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shoes made of orphan hair

i fell in love with a boy on the stairs.
the back of his starry head.
the way his brillo hair curled against his scalp.
the smell of his leather jacket.
the stiffness of his neck as he turned his head to acknowledge a fellow walker.
the slight glimpse i got of part of his plush pink lips.
and i never even saw his face.

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deff not finished.

"la tristesse durera toujours."- van Gogh

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  • piggyback
    January 21, 2009
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    It feels complete to me.

    The description here is very good, emotional, and detailed. I like it.