The flesh of valleys
never retains the shades
of my sunburned waves.
There is
not a dot
of blond
on the fringe of my honesty.
I become nothing less than doubtful
in the blemish
of sweet words.
Your purple pigmented prowess
is prime if only provisional.
But I know you can taste
every nuance of grape
in my ink-less
skin.
Author notes
"Violet Hill"
More human than human
A contest entry
- § pink lemonade and hissing serpents § by notorious.
702 points, ended October 10, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) pt 8 by whispernthedark.
700 points, ended October 25, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is wonderful, you took your prompt and ran with it. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Um hello
Did you read my contest am glad you liked it thanks for commenting. -
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It seemed more like a story. I wasn't sure what kind of entries you were asking for.
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violet hill
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I don't like Coldplay, so I wouldn't know.
Thanks
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LoL neither do I--that's the only song I like by them
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