I am foolish like so many before me
They look at their new school
Looking for a new beginning
New joy
Something to enjoy out of life
New friends, fun classes, happy days
Hell was I wrong
The only thing you get
Is loneliness
More depression
And a greater desire to commit suicide
Thinking for once people will recognize you
Know you exist
Even just talk to you
A simple
“Hi” “how are you”
But now you get jack shit
not even a friendly smile
So what was once a promising future
Has now become the last stop
In this empty journey
what do u think..be honest cause i cant write
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this describes perfectly how svhool is, its very very very good, i really love it and you are a great writter so stop saying you can't write cause ive seen alot of poems on here and alot of them cant write but your really good
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You can write very gd. You have alot of passion in it and its heart felt.
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It's so sad; and can be so so true. Wonderful write on this issue. I hope you were able to overcome this situation, I'm sure it'll make you stronger. Keep penning!
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Hopefully that isn't your last stop...I'm not gunna be like everyone else that says 'AWWW OMG UR GUNNA BE FINE GIVE IT TIME'...time is the present. Future is everchanging.
The problem is...humans have to CREATE their own future...no such thing as something just coming by...unless you take it.
Hopefully you will be able to take a new opportunity and survive through the one you are in.
Keep writing
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