i could sit with you
forever
and just be
i could talk with you
about anything
and everything
you make me happy
like i've never known
you kiss me
and nothing else matters
when you hold me
i feel safe
and when you touch me
i feel relief
i love you
Please tell me what you think
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No - I don't see you as depressed, to be honest, to read someone's work and simply think - they are depressed is complete short sightedness - writing is the unloading, the expressing of those inner thoughts, which, yes, at times are darker, but it is not an indicator you are depressed.
This is one of my favourites of yours - simply because i think it gets really close to aspects of who you are, particularly at the end.
The title by the way is 'Comfortable' :-0)
Hugs and stuff.
James
xxx
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WOW i'm so glad you feel this way its a lot better than your usual depressde poems even though there still good poems lol. Just saying I like you in a better mood Anyways lol nice poem i really do like it!!!!
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thanks sean!
i'm not really a depressed person, just so you know. it's usually just the only time i can write. i know it doesn't make much sense, but it's a lot easier for me to express my happy feelings outright, while i hold in all of my negative feelings. writing keeps me from exploding.
i'm glad you like it though, that means a lot.
love you!
~j
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