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The little things i loathe

The flush of red in a lovers cheeks
goes unnoticed in the dark
as does the rapist playing gentleman in the park
with so many wrongs and so few rights
how can justice ever when a fight

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oh what fun i tried to rhyme

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  • skies painted red
    September 22, 2008
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    not bad for an ill man.the little srtip of light through the door's crack let me see you...


  • Mrs. Moretti
    September 22, 2008

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    I doubt it ever fully will. Sadly so many DO go unnoticed, and there isn't much we can do to make a great impact.