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Dani's poem

We had always been friends
A quick hello as we passed
We never knew we had so much in common
Till that day we discovered music

We both loved to hear the ring
Of a violin and viola
We both loved to hear the sound
Of voices singing out

 

Now i can say we are best friends

You are someone i can turn too

And tell you my life story

Let you know all my troubles

Now as I look back, I wonder
How could we be so blind
We were best friends in the making
But now we are one better

Sisters

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  • musicsmyworld
    September 22, 2008
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    Oh my goodness Hannah!
    this is beautiful!
    it does seem strange how it all happened...
    last year we sat with you at lunch for a while, but then we moved eating areas, and didn't really see you any more...
    but this year, things have all changed!
    anyways
    keep on writing!
    MKate


  • November-Dani
    September 22, 2008

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    I LOVE YOU!
    This poem is fantastic, so well written! I feel so speical!! You truly have a calling for poetry! Well done!!
    Love you tons,
    Dani.