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To Lose You

Close your eyes and dream of tommorow
close your eyes forget all your sorrows
im the dream youll never have
im the reason youll never laugh

Remember me as one youll never know
forget me please as it will help you grow
i hold you close within my dreams
to give you up is best it seems

wait and dream for i will take you home
ill live my life i will not be alone
ill have my mem'rie of you for that one day
theres nothing else that cannot say

when i die will you know me
when i die i hope to meet
you but long before the day
that theres nothing else to say


Remember me as one youll never know
forget me please as it will help you grow
i hold you close within my dreams
to give you up is best it seems

Author notes

This one is written about my unborn daughter. I'm still not sure im gonna be able to raise her. Its not my best written poem but I dont think its horrible

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  • JustFallingApart
    September 22, 2008
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    This is a great poem. I don't think this would be good to read to a baby though. I mean, would you want that read to you? Not trying to offend you in any way, I was just expecting more happy joyful type of thing. But this is realy a great poem and it's just like what my friend was thinking before she decided to keep the baby. nice write