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enough

Keep lying to yourself saying "You ARE good enough"
Because youre not! You cant do anything right
You dont deserve him
He will be doing all the work in the relationship
All you can do is sit on your lazy fat ass and sleep
Nothing but a gold digging slut with an IQ of 108
You cant cook
You cant clean acceptably
You arent smart
Youre falling short of intelligence
An emotional wreck with 20-sum pets
Body far from perfect, fat and scarred
Only thing youre good at is sex, but how long can you please your man?
Life has become nothing more than waiting for that next cigarette
Dont forget cutting you razor addicted cunt
You slice away to numb the pain
So the next time you stand in front of that "oh so harsh" mirror, stop lying and accept the fact that
"You ARE NOT fucking good enough..."

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i wrote this to myself...to remind me of how fucked up i really am. i need to stop lying to myself

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  • peridotPixi
    November 17, 2008

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    I love you, you r good enough for me.. i like the expressions you have used and how you remind yourself of the way you feel, i hope that soon you will feel better about yourself and that you can write a happy poem about yourself, keep writing, ~love your wifey


    • Lonely Christina
      November 17, 2008
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      i love you too and awww thanks amy. ya im tryna feel better about myself..idk tho. thanks again


  • xxvampyregirlxx
    October 18, 2008
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    none of this is true christina! ur amazing


  • UnHoLy-VeNgEaNcE
    October 14, 2008
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    your way to hard on yourself!!lighten up and love yourself more(even when it seems inpossible)

  • AngelOfDarkness88
    September 22, 2008
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    This is NOT true!!!!


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    Christina I know this isnt true. You are far to hard on yourself. I know we are our own worst critics and no one is more critical of myself than i am but I can tell that how you see yourself is below reality.

    its a shame that such a well written poem is turned to tear down its maker. You did a good job with the emotion in the poem and although the rythm is a little shake its still well done. Its a great poem but your wrong.


    • Lonely Christina
      September 23, 2008
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      oh yes it is...how do u kno its not true? thank you 4 ur comment tho..glad u liked the poem.


  • trekkergirl
    September 22, 2008

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    I think you need to take it a little easier on yourself. You aren't half bad here now. You are very hard on yourself.

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