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I am Misery, You are my new victim, I mean friend

Misery needs company
And guess what!?! I chose you!
That is the reason
You have been feeling so alone, depressed
and blue.

I had the pick of the litter,
And I just happened to land on you.
I make you see nothing really matters
Because pretty soon you'll realize you
are through.

You feel yourself slipping,
Begging to get away.
Don't worry about it darling,
This is just how I play.

You feel so lost in this sea
of broken dreams,
Drowning in the sufficating emptiness,
Where nothing is what is seems.

Each day you feel you are losing it.
It's only a matter of time.
On your wrist you will slit,
And then you will be mine.

I am your only true friend.
You can trust in me.
I'm just trying to show you the inevitable end,
Just trying to open your eyes to see.

In time you will thank me,
Once you finally give in.
You will be gald I made you see
You were only destined for this sin.

It's a work in progress but what do ya think so far!! LET ME KNOW!!

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  • Wow, this is so sad. I can relate to this so well. amazing write and the flow is great my favorite lines were

    In time you will thank me,
    Once you finally give in.
    You will be glad I made you see
    You were only destined for this sin.

    great write

  • hurtgurl
    September 22, 2008
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    All i can say is WOOOOOOOOOOOW!

  • bballchic01
    September 22, 2008
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    wow this is like super good love it