See that V flying through the air
People everywhere stop and stare
Their Beaks are pencils in the sky
They are so graceful when they fly
They zoom like acrobats
their sleek as cats
I feel sad to see them go
but they'll be coming back I know
Author notes
peacepartygirl
A contest entry
- CHEER ME UP by Darc Soul 69.
600 points, ended October 1, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cheer Me Up In Rhyme by piccola.
700 points, ended November 24, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Is this too kidish
Comments
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I wrote about that flying v also. It amazes me how they can fly like that, making turns, changing direction and still in that perfect v. Wonderful. Thank you for entering
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this is cute! I like Canadian geese, and I think your rhyming works here too. Thanks for the smile!
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this is beautiful and it fits so well with the border that you have chosen to use. I love how you chose to word everything and how it all seemed to flow together. I want to thank you for following the rules as well as for taking the time to enter my contest. I want to wish you the very best of luck as well. Thanks again
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