street gangs and robberies
money and accessories
playing good cop to enemies
those who threaten our security
no playing in the streets
drug addicts looking for something sweet
girls wrapped up in blood stained sheets
boys lay dead on the cold concrete
innocent bystanders are forsaken
children are being taken
people have been shaken
the world must reawaken
the effects of crime on society
cause fear and anxiety
bringing confusion to families
full of lies and mysteries
A contest entry
- CRIME!! by black hearted rebel.
300 points, ended September 25, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - come take a look! please?? (rhyming contest!) by nobodys-girl.
400 points, ended July 16, 238 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites(: by ladybug..
625 points, ended July 29, 103 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
did my muse come back?
Comments
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I don't like the fact that this actually happens places. I remember that this is how it went down in my old neighbourhood, & I don't wish to relive it at all. Thanks for sharing.
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this is so full of truth, it's just amazing. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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I love this its the best!wow!great write
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Very good, well written rhyme and flow, and you really told it like it is.
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WOW!!!
This was wonderful...I love it!!!thanks so much for entering
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