Driving down the road,
minding my own,
looked in my mirror,
my hands began to quiver.
My knees began to shake,
my foot slammed on the brake.
What such an action,
would course the above,
it was the nearest thing,
to perfect love.
A goddess I swear to you,
you have to look twice,
she was so nice.
What she was doing I ,
was soon to find out,
she didn't need to shout.
The message was loud,
and clear, she wanted,
me now and here.
I walked behind my truck,
she told me I was in luck,
she was feeling randy as hell,
would I be the man ,
to break her spell.
Well who was I to say no,
I wanted sex as much too,
we found a spot,
and lay down,
now we could really go to town.
I took of her blouse,
and my heart missed a beat,
her firm breasts ,
and black bra,
what a treat.
I knew there and then,
this was no dream,
but such beauty I
had never seen.
I wanted to please her,
in every way,
so I let my tongue,
have it's say.
I licked her,
up and down,
round and round,
from breasts to feet,
and in between,
if you know what I mean.
To this day,
I have memories,
of her.
There will never,
be another,
she was my,
out of town,
lover.
Author notes
Items 16-black bra.
20-tongue.
A contest entry
- Your Challenge Is To... by Dalaney.
900 points, ended October 2, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cheater's Club #3-adults only-pre-writes welcome by alaskanamber.
700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - L'Amour en plein air - Liebe in open air - L'amore al fresco by Douglas Ramsbottom.
400 points, ended May 6, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 12 of 12
-
About as realistic and erotic as a kick in the mouth from a demented kangaroo, mate. More commas here than an abo has fleas...................
-
-
Strewth ! Thanks for your comments !
Carl.
-
-
Very funny and sexy. A gold star for you my fellow poet.
-
-
Thank you ,glad you liked.
-
-
oh, i do like this write very much, but darlin' it is a free verse contest, not a rhyming one
still, you have done a great job. love, lane
-
-
Thank you glad you like it.I guessI did not read the rules properly. Sorry.
-
-
mmmm kind of a car crash sex...
but this was hot...
-
-
lol thank you.
-
-
hey i love this poem!!! really flows well :-) good luck in contest x
-
-
Thank you for reading, best wishes Carl.
-
-
That was really cute!! I like the flow! Another great job by you!
-
-
Thank you, glad you like it ,Carl x
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 12 of 12
