It is cold and citron is at the end of my dream
Time came for birds of autumn to go
And i am a poet who is left a lone...
And slowly going far down a river in pine tree's eyes
I am going far....
In a list
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Nice
Firstly, I'd capitalise i, it always looks better as I.
some commas would make the piece more structured, so it would be easy to read as the imagry in this is lovely, but the structure makes it hard to understand.
I love the natural feel. I was entranced.
Keep writing
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