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untitled number 7

I don't even know what to say
You've taken all I've got
All I had
Is now gone
You've taken my words
I don't know what I'm writing
I don't even know what I"m saying
I don't even know what I should do
Congratulations
You've taken
Me

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  • HereComesTheSun
    September 26, 2008

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    powerful

    a powerful piece in which show how much you care and how it affects you when they take their power and abuse it
    i love you girly stay strong