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Like A Barbie Doll



I wish I was pretty

with curves on my hips,

spider-leg lashes

and plush ruby lips.

 

I wish I was pretty,

slim, lean and tall.

Eyes seeing for-ever-ness, 
like my barbie doll.

 

Instead I feel ugly,

no curves to my hips,

short skinny lashes

and pale pinkesh lips.

 

My friends say I'm pretty
they say look inside,

that is where beauty lives

a friend, host and guide.

 

So maybe, I'm pretty

with a brain in my head

and I'll find my for-ever-ness,

while tearing barbie to shreds.

 

 

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    November 28, 2008
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    Oh Barbie caused all kinds of trouble for us - with big boobs, an impossibly tiny waistline, and perfect symmetrical hips -(remember 36,24,36)? Yeah, well. It's even worse now. I had the Barbie with the bob, not the pony tail, so I couldn't even mess with her hair...

    I'll join the NOT a BARBIE FAN club. Let me at 'er!

    Love the poem! Great background!

  • Warrior7
    October 9, 2008

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    Congrats Cindy, very well deserved for the gold my friend


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    October 8, 2008

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    Thank s for your entry

    I love the colors on this and the brush effects, like sticks that look like tress lol. Very pretty. The richness of the colors is something else as well.

    God Bless
    Tammy


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    Hehe love the poem, never did like barbie much Fantastic work, good luck in your contest

  • Warrior7
    September 23, 2008
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    Now that's a better ending , rip her head off Cindy oh and don't forget to pull off Ken's arms and legs that will make Barbie weep


  • queen Moderators member
    September 23, 2008
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    Rip her apart shreddin barbie

  • Warrior7
    September 23, 2008
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    LMAO @ Queen's comment

    The poem is excellent and ofcourse so is the bkgd. You my friend are covered in beauty all over and don't you forget it
    Now as for Barbie well she is pretty anorexic and her boyfriend is a poof !!!!! lol

    • Cindy
      September 23, 2008
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      thank you Andy for the comment, I have changed the poem a bit if you wish to re-read. After your and queens comments I changed my mind on its ending. lol thanks mate


  • queen Moderators member
    September 23, 2008

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    I think you are pretty inside and out barbie is a little skinny pale bitch with weird feet

    • Cindy
      September 23, 2008
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      thank you Queen for the comment, I have changed the poem a bit if you wish to re-read. After your and Andys comments I changed my mind on its ending. lol thanks mate

    • Warrior7
      September 23, 2008
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      Hey mate, i love your comment about Barbie, little skinny pale bitch

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