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Patience

Synchronized actions that make my life hell,
All things imagined,
But none turn out well...

Innocent actions turn words into hate,

Actions of malice and hurt we create.

 

Items and souls are lost without pain,

Nothing is simple,

Nothings the same.

 

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Option 6 *pink sparkling panther* lol

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  • GrasshopperKills
    May 15

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    Waiting

    I am not sane,
    In the brain,
    From all this pain,
    Without cocaine!

    This poem reminds me of the time I was really bad into drugs! Just about too the tee! The sad thing is, I put down drugs and picked up a bottle.. And once I broke that seal, I released the devil.. That bottle caused me to lose for more then all of the drugs I used and put me through more pain then anything!

    Fabulous!!

    I am curious to the pain that you wrote this poem about though! Very curious!


  • joleahe
    October 24, 2008
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    I love this! FINALIST!!!!! thank you for entering


  • SilverQ
    September 22, 2008

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    Wow

    Amazing short poem. Three thumbs up.
    ~Going for top comments and I'm to poor to applaud~
    ~ Need coments on poems, thanks ~