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Life's Diminishing Tale

Thoughts escape me, time passes by
The way of life is discontinued and dry
Dust settles, flowers wilt, I cry for the dying day
But the answers to my problems keep getting in my way
Ignoring signs, stopping for, no one in my life
I ignore the signs, I ignore my life, all I love is put aside
Blackened to, the point of, regurgitation
In my head, lies in every single relation

Trust is, throw around so loosely these days
I believe no one, I am just running away
Myself, I cannot even draw the truth
I feel so wasted, and I feel so used
Politeness and love, exist no more
We have all the answers but we don’t know what they’re for
This life, seems to be, just about useless
But it’s the only one we have, so questions are pointless

I’d sooner be in debt with heaven and Earth
Before I’d try to figure out what life’s worth
At this point I just don’t even care
About these answers, and what’s out there

Little by little I seek no more thoughts
Distinguishing lies from truth is lost
I’ll come right out and I’ll say this, I swear
I’m done with this life, this is all I can bare!

And I’m pushed to the point of my self-destruction
It’s so far away, but can end all so sudden
Years can pass by, but it can turn into days
Minutes, or seconds, and you could just wither away
So I’ll make the most of, what is hardly existing
And I’ll make the best of the darkness life brings!

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  • Dead Hair
    November 7, 2008

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    A song? I'd love to hear the music!
    The lyrics are musical on their own, though. The rhyming does not sound forced, and the flow is generally very good. Well done!