"You shouldn't be scared. I won't let you fall."
I think I've already fallen..
"I won't hurt you, I dont want to hurt you."
That's what every guy says..
"Trust me, i won't break up with you. And if i do, it'll be the biggest mistake in my life."
Do you really feel that way?
"Your cute, sexy, and pretty, and awesome."
Everyday compliments.
"If she lookied like you, then yeah, i could understand why she thinks she can get any guy."
The interesting compliments.
"I love that about you."
Love.. A very scary word.
"Don't be scared, i love you."
Do you really?
"I love you"
I won't say it back.
"But you know you do."
... Yes..
"I love you."
...I love you too.
Author notes
Chi-Nekoni
A contest entry
- True Love by Samantha Marie.
450 points, ended October 5, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - FIRST KISS IN THE POURING RAIN! by Bohemianwriter.
850 points, ended October 22, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? ^-^
Comments
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this was a truly romantic peice! heartwarming! it made me feel all queezey inside!!! but it wasnt what i asked for, for this contest!
still i'll just it fairly, and that doesnt mean this isnt a magnificent write! because it truly is magical!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANKS FOR ENTERING
AND GOOD LUCK! -
wow this is so good and true
This is much different from the other styles i've read, i really like it!
amazing write
thanks for entering and good luck! -
Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!
What an amazing and humorus poem! This is so much fun. You don't find poems that are more or less funny and yet still talking about the scary side of love. And really, that is understandable. It's... scary.
Well done and good luck.
God Bless, Larkbird
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