summer's death fragrance
mother's toddler runs from youth
winter's sacrifice
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku 5-7-5 by piccola.
600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thanks for commenting.
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Great Haiku, really neat-long time no see-missed you
hope all is extremely well for you lol
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Colorful application ...
of poetry to nature. I loved the motion in these few words, and the depth.
Love
Myra
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what a brilliant capture in 17 syllables, dear friend.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and the best of luck in the contest. -
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Thanks, brother, I am honored by your comments
God bless you this day
Wade
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Imagery flows from this one, a good Haiku for the season.
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Great Haiku!
Wonderful imagery my friend. You do haiku quite well. You have painted a beautiful autumn image with your few words. Lovely write to fill the reader's senses.
Blessings,
Sandy
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you're such a cheerleader (and a sweetie)
Thanks for watching over me
I hope you know I'm returning the favor...
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Very touching. I cannot get the hang of haiku's and always admire people who can. 3 thumbs up. Keep up the good work
~Going for top comments and I'm to poor to applaud~
~ Need coments on poems, thanks ~
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